He looks real good Bryony - he really does

just a couple of little things that would make it even better
Eyebrows - as Val said at the back corner of his eye- it needs to be shorter and up a little if that makes sense
And I would of clipped more under his chin into his beard/side of face - need again to be in line with the corner of his eye. Will put up a pic of Mr Fritz so you can see what I mean

Hopefully it will make sense am never very good at explaining things, far easier to show someone

but seriously you did a good job - if you had been allowed to leave his legs longer he would of looked even smarter


There look at Fritz's eyebrows - nice and tight to the corner of his eye

and as you had to do such a short beard I find it looks longer if you come in closer ok?